annanas's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love Me Love Me Not?]

very nice for a first project

clap clap clap for your acheivment :D
seriously good job on your first project, now to use a reviewing system that alot of people do

Teh goodh:
-animation was very smooth
-teh second half of the dialogue was awsome
-story was ok
-nice art style

Teh bads:
-the first half of the dialogue was kinda messed up "I dont feel the same way about you"
-you could have made a moar fancier loadin bar :D

I must say this is a good piece of work, dont give up on animation and lets see more entries from you

P.S
put a display icon on the animation its gonna look better

[MGS: Sons of Stupidity]

THONG!

good for a first movie
the thong part was kind of funny

but this is how I would improve:
*dont breathe into the mike that much
*more details to make the whole thing look better
*write a script first, then animate, or plan what you are goin to say

otherwise good, hope to see moar flashes from you

KiteOfDark responds:

A script would certainly help me. I guess my acting in that movie really sounded like I did it on the spot, huh...
Since I did i guess it makes sense...
Thanks for the tips, although vague or obvious.

[Tom & Wade fight the spam]

heroic

god bless his soul

[Mario runs]

well... the movie served its purpouse

good job, you learned how to animate sprites, well atleast runing ones.
But if you want to show or test this then you should probably upload it to some upload site (if you dont know how to just PM me) cuz it is going to get blammed here, actually I gave it a 0, just so you know since its not really a movie its just a test, so no hard feelings.
I did give you an 8 in this review though because you did manage what you where going for, making the characters run

good luck in your future animations

ML

Menyourweird responds:

Dude it don't get blammed, one question do i know how to use the newgrounds preloader or it just sucks?