annanas's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness Czechstination II]

Dobra prace kamo

Hehe, gotta love the Czechs
I'm a foreigner living out of the country but I'm a born half Czech half Slovak. I'd write the review in Czech but my grammar is complete shite. Seeing this in some way reminded me of a piece of home. Thanks guys you made my morning.

Djjaner responds:

Diky kamo.. priste zas

[Hulk in Training]

at least its not sonic xD

good for not using sonic or mario but next time try having some plot in your animations, I know it is hard for a begginer but you just gotta work hard and eventually you will get it :D

also if you want to improve your animation skills try not to use sprites, you need to learn how to draw movments not how to cut up sprites :P

Michal

madsuzuki responds:

I agree, I'm actually not a fan of sprites, that's why I drew my own background. I used a sprite in my first one mainly because I needed to practice creating objects as movie clips.

I started this movie as just a way to practice the basics, but though it loked ok so posted it for feedback. Thanks for your review.

[Eraserdust Pilot]

Nice

Nice work
really liked it :D
I aint really sure what to improve on it though, seemed pretty cool itself. Some motion would be good

I hope this review was helpfull, have a nice day
Michal

P.S nice ball drawing skills

Rickfav responds:

Thanks! :) Designing testicles isn't the hard part just the pubes haha.

[Death Room (GOLUCH)]

well... here is some stuff you could improve

the good:
liked the idea
could have been much worse

the bad:
no sounds
some bodyes dissapeared after a while
you used too much motion tween
and so on...

I would start with fixing the major issues, no sounds and the overuse of motion tween

hope to see more from ya

michal

goluch responds:

Plz give me a moment this was my first ever animation i did second of all i cant mod it cus i lost the source files cus my hard drive blew up and on that drive was the death room 2 animation witch lasted around 4 mins with sound and better graphics but cus i lost this i stopped animating 3 years ago. But if i where ever to return to the animation world i would happily take your feedback!

[MGS: Sons of Stupidity]

THONG!

good for a first movie
the thong part was kind of funny

but this is how I would improve:
*dont breathe into the mike that much
*more details to make the whole thing look better
*write a script first, then animate, or plan what you are goin to say

otherwise good, hope to see moar flashes from you

KiteOfDark responds:

A script would certainly help me. I guess my acting in that movie really sounded like I did it on the spot, huh...
Since I did i guess it makes sense...
Thanks for the tips, although vague or obvious.

[Mario runs]

well... the movie served its purpouse

good job, you learned how to animate sprites, well atleast runing ones.
But if you want to show or test this then you should probably upload it to some upload site (if you dont know how to just PM me) cuz it is going to get blammed here, actually I gave it a 0, just so you know since its not really a movie its just a test, so no hard feelings.
I did give you an 8 in this review though because you did manage what you where going for, making the characters run

good luck in your future animations

ML

Menyourweird responds:

Dude it don't get blammed, one question do i know how to use the newgrounds preloader or it just sucks?